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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D7000
Shutter Speed:10/5000 second
Aperture:F/2.8
Focal Length:24 mm
ISO Speed:2000
Date Taken:Dec 16, 2012, 5:07:54 PM
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doll faceby =anglekisses

Photography / People & Portraits / Cosplay

photographed by Drew Hoshkiw

Critique by ~jtcheney Feb 21, 2013, 4:51:10 PM

Please forgive because I don't want to sound critical. As artists, we grow by someone pointing out inconsistencies so we can strive to be better artists. I don't want to discourage you because there are minor flaws in all art when under any microscope. I wouldn't have noticed many of the following constructive criticisms if the picture was a lower resolution.

My first impression was that like that the "rule of thirds" measure was followed, the makeup job on your model made me smile because it reminded me of those oriental porcelain masks that my mother used to collect. Also the intensity of her brown eyes is very enchanting (but I am always a sucker for eyes that look like they have a spark behind them).

Little details are off on this work when examined for any length of time. The model is very attractive and The photo was kept classy.

The backdrop doesn't compliment her colors. Also your model has some real beauty, but could use some primping: her nails are dirty, she is in need of a bleaching, especially where her arms and eyebrows are concerned. Now, the beauty is there, she is just not as well polished as she could be. If this was an impromptu photo-shoot then there is nothing wrong with her.

Lighting could have been spotted out a bit better, where shadows are involved they could have cast better symmetry.

Gosh, I don't want to come across as cold with my critique, after all I do like it, and I know you have the gift.

What do you think?

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Critique by ~EvilMadMuffin Feb 10, 2013, 6:02:20 AM

Well, indeed there isn't a doll in here, and no usual "Doll"-face, just a beauty.

Vision
First of all; there is no common doll face in here. Even tho you've picked the title as such, I take it not that way... maybe a wrong title or just a other point of few. Anyway, my vision is clearly to her/your eyes at first, followed by her face. It seems that she/you feel natural in here. No artificial smile, pose or anything else... wonderful.

Originality
Dolls are common, I guess. However, I like that way. with that body-paint.. I love the paint. Very intensive, with fantasy and beauty.

Technique
Well, the wall in the background does not suit the flair in here... the place could be better... the skirt looks like a very cheap carnival-skirt, but I accept it as one, since dolls got cheap clothes too. I wanna see if she/you 've got no nipples like Barbie-Dolls... haha. I envy you about your chest-size.

Impact
Mh, nothing to say.
hair

topless: Is cute, just a detail and no real nudity.
But the face and the painting in here are a miracle, just like fantasy and reality mixed... so well chosen. But I would wear a dress which underline the bodypaint, some detailed tops and some jewelery, colorful hairband, nack-band... all with decent symbols like those on your face. However, I like it!